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2 STARS ✮ CHERRIE LYNN ✮ RAW NEED

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Monday, June 26, 2017

RAW NEED

Larson Brothers #2

by

Cherrie Lynn










Rowan's life was turned upside down when her husband died in an MMA fight. Pregnant and alone she is still devastated by her loss. When Zane, lead singer of her favorite band, asks her out to get reprieve from sitting at home drowning in grief she happily accepts. They met at her husband's funeral - Matt is the brother  of the man who is responsible for Tommy's death. She feels a bit like a charity case, the pity date but at the same time she enjoys leaving the loneliness and pain behind for a night.

Zane has been enchanted with the beautiful widow from the first moment but with her being a fan AND pregnant AND still grieving he can't let this go anywhere past friendship. Yet, he can't get her out of his mind. He invites her to join him on the band's tour and Rowan is torn.  She has to consider the consequences - not just for her but also for her unborn baby.

She agrees, not able to resist the temptation to spend time with her favorite band and faster than both Rowan and Zane anticipated their feelings become more. Deeper, more intense, more erotic. Despite it all, Rowan keeps her emotional distance but for how long will she be able to resist the rockstar's charming offensive.





My book twin loved the first one in this series and has been prodding me to read Raw Deal ever since. Since these books can be read as a standalone I jumped at the chance to read Raw Need. Unfortunately it completely missed the mark for me. Let me explain why.

The beginning of the story was off to a slow start. I was waiting for something to happen that grabbed my attention and when it did it wasn't exactly a pleasant thing. The heroine from book 1, which my book bestie was raving about, had turned into a judgmental and condescending know-it-all. I let it slide, hoping for the book to improve. Alas, most of the characters really started to grind on my nerves.

We have Rowan's fangirl attitude towards rock star Zane which she held on to fast until the very end. At no point I had the feeling that Rowan genuinely loved the man. Most of the time it was about his career or fame and that was a bit of a turn-off. While I liked her alright for two thirds of the book, despite her worshipful attitude, I had no love left for her when I was done.

Her problem all along had been separating Zane Larson the man from Zane Larson, international rock star, front man of August on Fire.

She did some really crappy thing in the end (highlight spoiler at the end of this paragraph) and while the author didn't elaborate much on what happened after that. I was livid - after all Zane has done for her, the way he treated her with nothing but devotion and love she didn't trust him. And when I thought that was outrageous Rowan topped it off with a fangirl scream because she was picked up by a stretch limo. My annoyance knew no bounds and I just was over it.

Some spiteful woman insinuated that Zane was cheating.




Zane was the highlight of this book. He was a wonderful, protective and eventually frustrated  guy who had his own sad past and demons to fight but he always was there for Rowan. He always tried to be the shield for the woman he fell in love with and she always threw it back into his face.

She was breaking him too, and he didn’t think she realized how much.

Throughout the book I felt that Rowan never deserved a man like Zane. She always gave into her family's pressure and their wishes and Zane always came second.


“You’re like a little puppet dancing on the end of their strings, Rowan.”


The whole side cast irritated me at some point in the story. I covered Savannah, the MIL was a raging manipulative bitch. Even Mike, the hero from book 1, angered me when he didn't have Zane's back towards the end. Damien, the third brother, was the only one who actually had some sense.




Despite it all Cherrie Lynn's writing is terrific. I will read Raw Deal because I trust my book bestie - she has never let me down and I am immensely intrigued by Damien's story. I can't wait to get my hands on that one.

As always my reminder - please do take my review with a grain of salt. At the end of the day we all have different tastes and experience books differently.


Raw Need is the second book in the Larson Brothers series but can be read as a standalone.





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2 STARS ✬ LEX MARTIN & LESLIE MC ADAM ✬ ALL ABOUT THE D

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Thursday, May 04, 2017

ALL ABOUT THE D

by

Lex Martin & Leslie McAdam


✬✬✬ 2 STARS ✬✬✬








Warning: this review will be a bit spoiler-y - if you don't want any spoilers please stop reading here.

The premise of this story, the youngest son of a prestigious Portland family having a pornographic blog, caught my attention. Joshua Cartwright needs an attorney to protect his identity and rights so he calls a law firm and makes an appointment with young Evie Mills. They meet up and they are instantly drawn to one another. After having heard what her new potential client does she needs to pitch it to her bosses and get them on board representing him. He is declined which opens up the opportunity for them to pursue their growing attraction. So what went wrong?

The first 35% I was intrigued. Granted the first bit was a little bit slow but that didn't bother me all that much since I knew the story would pick up, according to early opinions of blogger friends.

Evie is portrayed as a bit bookish, not caring much about her appearance and wearing frumpy clothes and a bit insecure. Josh is the gorgeous guy with the good heart who is actually looking for a meaningful relationship. I loved how they started to become friends although they escalated pretty soon into something more. I didn't mind because it wasn't unnatural. However and here the spoiler bits start:

When Evie learns that her bosses have changed their mind and will represent Josh she is fast to put her career above her budding feelings for Josh. I understand that she was a bit afraid that things with him wouldn't work out but she didn't even take time to think about it, she just broke it off with him. And towards the end when all the secrets have blown up in their faces she drops the nugget that she hates her job. What-the-what? All that drama for a job she doesn't even love?


Moving on. 
They can't resist the pull for very long and they continue a clandestine relationship. When Evie stays over at Josh's place and accidentally sees his blog mailbox filled with mails from women who want to do the dirty with him she realizes that she can't do this - sharing her man with around two million of women. And then she asks...

“You read these [mails] last night. You posted last night. Did you use these videos from these women propositioning you to get yourself off?”
I can’t deny it. I’m mortified, but I mean, who wouldn’t look? “Yes, but it didn’t mean anything,” I repeat.



Huh?
OK OK. It's not as if I wasn't aware that men jerk off watching porn but they have only been together for a couple of weeks and he had said before that porn wouldn't do it for him any longer...


"When I made that post, I was looking at a video of us, not anyone else. I mean, yes, I watched the other video, but I got off to you for the main event.

Well then. That makes it all better.


And then:

“So if guys sent me videos jerking off and licking their cum, telling me they wanted to fuck me and come on my tits, saying it didn’t matter if I had a boyfriend because they wouldn’t tell anyone, saying they’d meet me any time, any place, and I got off to it— that would be okay?”
Fuck, no.
“Evelyn, that’s not the same.”
Instantaneous rage blasts through me at the thought of guys going after my girlfriend. Of wanting to touch my girlfriend. Goddamn it, it is the same.

And if that wasn't bad enough - while he is waiting for her at their cafe after things go downhill...mind you, they were in a serious relationship at this point...when women recognized him and approached him:

He clears his throat, and I wait for him to tell them he has a girlfriend— to say he’s involved with someone, to say he’s taken— but he just laughs awkwardly.
“Thanks, ladies. It’s been a fun project.”
Come on, Josh. Decline her come-on.





And he didn't.

"I'm sorry, baby, I'm an idiot."

Can't agree more.
I have read through a lot of reviews about this book but nobody mentions this, which I find interesting. I don't think I'm on my own having an issue with this.


I wanted to love this story - unfortunately, it didn't work for me. The characters were likable but the inconsistencies spoiled them for for me. As always, I'll say that this might be a case of it's me and not you and you might experience this story completely differently. Make sure you read other reviews too. For me, unfortunately, it wasn't a winner.